Final Product & Feedback

 Final Leaflet Product

This is my final leaflet product. As you can see I have added some more colour from the last edit of the leaflet. With this last edit I am satisfied that I have met the breif that the NHS had given us. The colours help attract the target audience I was making the product for. The only think I would change in my leaflet is the text fonts eventhough a response from one of my leaflet feedback forms suggested to have different fonts for each topic which u thought was a good idea, but now that it has been a couple days since I did the edit and I have looked over the leaflet once last time I realized that it would have been better with just one text font.

Final TV Advert Product

This is my final TV advert. From the last edit I havent done much improvements however, I realized that I forgot to add the Better Health campaign logo the corner of the screen so I need to quickly change that issue. With this product I believe I have met the breif that our client the NHS have given me. The use of all information is accurate as was published by the NHS themselves and the use of the different colours and camera angles and sizes will attract my target audience to my product. One improvement that I could of made and previously tried to was making the advert shorter so that it didn't go over one minute long. Another improvement that I could of done was to have less reading material and more watching material as I realized that some people including me would find it hard to read some much writing on screen as an advert eventhough I want my product to be informative as I found that peoples knowledge on smoking is lacking, but next I could reduce the amount of reading material in my adverts and increase the amount of watch material in my adverts and even have a story in the advert in the shape of a voiceover (non-diegetic) or have someone/me speaking in the advert (diegetic).

Final Feedback

Now that I have completed the final products I wanted to get some final feedback even though I will be unable to edit any of the issues that the group of people I asked to fill out the form have outlined. However, I will keep these issues in mind for my next project. The first question I asked was what they liked about my leaflet, and I received three responses. These responses were they liked the background, how informative it was and that the bright colours make it easier to read as some of the subject topics are grim.

The next question I asked was what they didn't like about my leaflet, again I got three responses. These responses were they didn't like how the text fonts changed with each topic and thought it would be better to have the font the same all the way through the leaflet and the other two responses were they had nothing they didn't like about my leaflet.

 The next question I asked was what they liked about my advert and again I got three responses. These responses were they liked how informative it was/ the information is accurate and that it was easy to understand. 

The final question I asked was what they didn't like about my leaflet. With this question I got three responses, these responses were they didn't like how the transition was used inconsistently and I tried to keep the transition the same so that the advert didn't get confusing, the second response was nothing and the last response said they think there should have been more video as some people may find it hard to read a lot of information on the screen as an advert. I can understand so next time I will make sure there is more footage and audio they can listen to instead of reading throughout the whole of the advert.